Alchemy of Scrawl (http://alchemyofscrawl.blogspot.com/) just gave a thumbs up to Weston's "Invisible Dawn" and sent me a nice email letting me know a review is in the works for Scarab next week!
She had some honest feedback about the cover and length of the techno-speak in the first chapter and a half, but liked it. This, I can deal with.
I had my wife proof the first two chapters. Together, we reduced the example combat + techobabble from 2900 words to 2400 words. Everything else, they need to know now. I have an appointment Monday for the new cover.